Raine Levy

[Raine]

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She wears a kimono most of the time, as she feels mostly comfortable in it, especially without shoes.[/style][STYLE=width: 400px; padding: 10px; font-family: Arial narrow; font-size: 20px; letter-spacing: 3px; text-transform: uppercase; background-color: 525252; border-bottom: 3px solid #f9f9f9;]★ PERSONALITY[/style][STYLE=width: 400px; padding: 10px; background-color: d5d5d5; font-family: arial; color: 313131; font-size: 11px;]★ G E N E R A L: Raine is a shy 15 year old with no friends. She's a wee bit lazy, but extremely determined to rid the world of evil souls, even though she's gentle in nature. When around large crowds, she doesnt speak a word. But, when by family, she speaks like a semi normal person, except for more calm. She never been up to a Kisshen up close, but in order for her help bring a inch of peace to the area,she needs help to over come the minuscule fear. But in battle, its a totally different story. The young woman turns relentless to every single person she meets, and can barely decide if theyre friends, so when any battle starts, she mentally loses control and attacks like a beast. Its one of her curses. The mind of a beast when threatened, and the heart of a savage. She doesnt use weapons at all, but if its really needed, she uses the hidden tiny hand made weapons like Kunai's, but made out of hollowed stones,and her claws that never break off unless filled down. ★ L I K E S: ♥ Sleeping ♥ Helping People ♥ Cuddling Wolfs ★ D I S L I K E S: ✗ People Who Wake Her Up ✗ Evil ✗ The Sun ★ F I G H T - S T Y L E: Raine was trained to use hand to hand combat in dire situations, but she loves using her legs. She never used a weapon in her life, so she never really fought anybody harmful. Usually,she uses her legs. ★ A B I L I T I E S: Soul Perception Ability Name:Soul Perception Ability Type: Detection Details:The ability to read and detect any soul, and know their characteristist, personality, and Soul Wavelength. Negative Effect: It lowers her awareness of regular human around her, and lowers her attack when fighting. Ability Name:Soul Recognition Ability Type: Detection Details:The ability to find any soul's emotion and mental state, and their Physical state Negative Effect: It lowers her stamina and energy in a fight, and when she isnt, she loses the her defense. ★ S T R E N G T H S: ♥ Her Wolf-Like Instincts ♥ The Ability To Adapt To Any Fighting Style Her Enemy Has ♥ Her Ability To Tell Anybody's Emotion ★ W E A K N E S S E S: ✗ Loss Of Motivation ✗ The Sound Of Horns Or Bells ✗ Her Ability To Block Out Negative Comments ★ H I S T O R Y: Raine was born on a warm summer day in Japan, her mother happy to be born with a girl. Her father was on a trip for a year when she was born. But after two years, a rival clan invaded her home and their leader, a witch cast a curse on her that made her resemble a wolf for the rest of her life. She originally had long black hair and beautiful purple eyes. After the tragic raid, she was alone, her clan destroyed, her family gone. There was only one person that had survived, and it was an old herbalist and mage. Her name was Helen, and from the age of two, she taught Raine how to mak herbs, carve stones into weapons, and build the elements to her fitting. But at age 5, the old woman taught her a clan secret. Soul Recognition was the ability to know who's soul it exactly was, and to tell their exact emotion and mental state. It was a very cool ability, but it had it set backs. Every full moon, she had to go through a 24 hour meditation to get back some of her energy. After she was taught those abilities, Helen made her go out more often to get food and clothes, and herbs almost every day until the woman got really sick and started to die. So every sinle day, Raine prayed to the goddess Amaterasu until one day, the house in the woods burned down in the woods. She was left by her lonesome again, so before she could even go into town, she found a medium, roomy cave that belonged to a injured pack of wolfs that she healed and stayed with until she hit 15, and thats when she headed in to town and found Death Academy. 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[Raven Armstrong]

I like this character but with strengths and weakness I had in mind combat wise. Like her instincts could be counted as one. Or lack of motivation. Anything that would slow her down or make her stronger.
Otherwise, approved!

[Near]

Also, with the abilities you outlined in her history. Could you create a separate section. It's only because I would like to make this something that's easily found when it's used in Character.

A layout similar to this would be great

Ability Name Here
Ability Type Here
Details

Also since this is a special ability that your character is starting out with I want you to make it very clear what set backs it has. I realize you have this in your history already but make it idiot proof so no one complains about it being op or anything.

Thank you
-Spirit

[Raine]

FIXED! I hope its good enough ^-^ If not, ill re-edit it

[Near]

Hi,

sorry it took so long to get back to you, i have been busy. Just quickly in my previous post i asked you to post drawbacks for your abilities and make them obvious.

Since your asking to start out with a more advanced soul perception this needs to happen. I apologize for being a pain but can you please post it underneath the relevant techniques.

-Spirit

[Raven Armstrong]

Seems alright to me, Thanks so much for making these changes.
Approved~